Evaluation of Scripts

In the first draft of the script we thought of a brief storyline of of what we wanted but didn't really think about what we were going to do. In the first draft we were going to have women walking around a dark church setting and flashbacks to a room which is the executioners torturing place. However we wanted to show a little background into the executioners life so we put in flashbacks of different point of his life to make the film disorientated and relate to the feeling of loneliness that The Executioner had to deal with his whole life. Overall I am really happy with the final outcome of the scripts and I think it displays some good background and nice start of the storyline to the audience